3.63sLittle heartbreak, you know, work it into the story.
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3.4sMake those characters a little more three-dimensional.
2.83sA little richer experience for the reader.
2.26sMake those second hundred pages...
2.66sreally keep the reader guessing what's going to happen.
2.59sSome twists and turns. Little epilogue.
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